by TheRevelation Dec 28, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
For you I would stop the world from turning, |
by dora
Hey a very heartfelt poem. very well written. good job keep it up xx |
by Raychil
Very good poem, so sweet and so tragic, I loved it and the flow was simply marvelous. Beautiful. |
Very very good but the flow was off a tiny bit but that's okk. It was a great poem anyway! |
Good poem. So much emotions. Very heartfelt. The flow was off a bit but the rhyming was great. |