It's beautiful i loved it, i loved the idea... the flow and wording was wonderful, you really have a great talent, keep up the good work! 5/5

Good poem! Really well done!!!! I usally hate reading love poems.... but this was good! My fav verse was
"Unlike a restless night, this beauty could not awaken,
Lying there as if dead, yet in a horrid incantation.
She waited for the kiss of her prince, whom was having difficulties,
Slaying a dragon whom did not want to be a causality" That was so good!!!!!! Really, I just loved reading it!

Wow, really good write. I loved it. The flow and the structure were great. I could really relate and I am sure a lot of others could as well. Great Job!

Peace, Joe

Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper.

Jeez . I just absolutely LOVED this . Beautifully written . The flow was great . I can relate to this poem . It was just really good .

And thank yu very much for yu opinions . I didn`t even realize those words i left out O_O ...
..__MiNDYY

:O I loved it... its better than really good, it's AWESOME :)

I Loved this!
I thought it was very creative and unique and it was written very well.
I enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme and I thought the wording was a pleasure to read.
My favourite part was the imagery used, I thought it was excellent.