You have done another great job here, you are really a very great talented writer, keep up the great work.

Wow! As I was reading this, I could almost imagine it being sung. Haha! This would be a real good song. Anyway, good job!
5/5

I love lyrics and this is very good mousie, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

These are very moving lyrics that i would love to hear performed

This is what me n my boyfriend are going through. Tough times. This speaks right to my heart. Its amazing!5/5. I love your lyrics

I really really enjoyed reading this. I think it'd make a great song.

Beautiful work. It truly touched me and made my morning. You should get more people to read this. Keep it up

Great job! ur going on my favorites list.

Well written, I'd love to hear this sung. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

That was gorgeous. Straight from the heart and very moving. It felt like your heart and soul went into this - which is a key aspect of good writing.

Keep it up.

This is a beautiful song. I'd love to hear it with music. I have enjoyed reading your poems. Keep up the good work.

Oh wow....that was so beautiful..it really touched my heart.
This was absolutely perfect.

Good point, and I've done it many times, sat writing or commenting on poetry because I can't sleep.
The one thing I hate about commenting on lyrics is I can't hear them sung or with music...it's annoying.
The flow (which is important with lyrics) was very smooth. Sure there were lovey dovey overused parts in there but many current love songs even in the charts are just the same.
I'm honestly no good on offering CC to lyrics because I don't know the first thing about them. And even though it's said songs are just poetry to music, you can get away with many more things in music than in poetry...
Thanks for sharing.