I really enjoyed reading this, great flow and the emotion that went into really showed. 5/5

Good job! I like the positive note to this poem, though you could still feel the sadness laced throughout. You did a very nice job with this one, and I wrote one for this contest too called Living In Reverse. Nice job Midnight Sun enjoyed another one!
Charisma*

A very nice write. :) *5/5

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! You're comments were so sweet, and I hadn't quite gotten that reaction from you in a while, so wow! Thanks a lot! Sorry to make you think this was a comment! lol But in a way it is! heehee

Oh yeah, never did tell you I like your expression "liquid pain." Cuz whether you meant it to or not it makes the tears sound as if the liquid, and that would make sense.
Charisma*

Great poem.
This deserves to win!
And thanks for the comment.
5/5

Good job. The flow wasn't perfect but the content outstanding. A beautiful write! 5/5

I loved this!
Just beautiful.
Wonderful word choice and imagery and I thought the flow and rhyme scheme worked very well.

Ooo! Very good job. The flow was good. & I absolutley loved the positivity in this. It shows a lot of strength. Great job. Keep it up, Hunny.

Bri.x