An EXCELLENT write. I've been writing some with a similar style though I'm not sure I've got your way with words. One I have that kinda reminds me of this style is "Found Me In You." Good job Twisted Heart!
Charisma*

You did an amazing job with this. I mean the phrasiology is just beautiful and flowed wonderfully. Great job once again :)!!!
~Midnight Sun

Within the depths of bottled love, a heart cries out in pain
As it sits in desert lands, waiting for the rain.
^^^
Such a heart touching couplet Jeannie.

Wonderfully penned as always, my friend
Take care deary

Gorgeous..
The flow on this poem was excellent, really well written indeed.
I don't know how you do it =)
5/5
*Gem*

Cool poem. i thought this was going to be a reminiscent poem aobut being a child or somehting. but it really amazed me! i loved the offbeat rhyming and longer lines[couplets]. it was well done and the language you used was good as well.

xx3Lauren