by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Dec 28, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
[[You guys man not understand what this poem is about. So I\'ll tell you a few things that will help you understand. At 2 AM in the morning of December 28 of 2006, in my parking lot of my apartment building a car was left empty, killers running for their lives. Police were only a split second late. The murderes were gone. We all had a lock down and its a freaky situation because we havent had a murder since what 2004-2005. Its a scary situation and its horrible to know you may be the next one. Please comment on this true poem! Thank you!]] |
Omg! that'd be way freaky! great poem, love it! |
by emptysole
Hey hate to be there were i live we all leave our doors unlocked and its scary to think that this does happin around the world any way you realy should add some emotions into it but great work =] |
Wow im from a city tht has drugs the casual kidnap/murder and we always look for the missing people but stuff like tht never happens |
by Taylor
Haha who cares if some of it isn't "grammatically correct?" I'm sure thats EXACTLY what you were thinking about when you were writing this lol. |
Ooh freaky. although a scary subject to write about and a cool style you wrote it in. it isnt a great poem. it didnt flow very well and there were many spelling mistakes. i think it does have potential though and you shoudl reread and correct it. |