Loose- A TRUE POEM!

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Dec 28, 2006


[[You guys man not understand what this poem is about. So I\'ll tell you a few things that will help you understand. At 2 AM in the morning of December 28 of 2006, in my parking lot of my apartment building a car was left empty, killers running for their lives. Police were only a split second late. The murderes were gone. We all had a lock down and its a freaky situation because we havent had a murder since what 2004-2005. Its a scary situation and its horrible to know you may be the next one. Please comment on this true poem! Thank you!]]

It's 1 A.M in the morning;
Gun shots ring through a home
Two killed instantly
One left to die
Bullet casings fall to the ground
Complete silence now.

It's 1:30 A.M in the morning now;
And a man vanished without a trace
A scream is covered by a hand
Making it's sound muffled
A family man dead
Floating down the river.

It's 2 A.M now;
Sirens start to scream
Breaking mornings beauty
A ghetto car left empty; doors opened
Police officers puzzed
Searching for the killers.

It's 2:30 A.M now;
The killers cannot be found
Police search the area
Not knowing
When the killers may strike again
Or if even if they end dead themselves.

Lock your doors
And hold your family close
Killers are on the loose
Willing to strike again
Too late,
Your already dead.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Omg! that'd be way freaky! great poem, love it!
    ____XOX

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Hey hate to be there were i live we all leave our doors unlocked and its scary to think that this does happin around the world any way you realy should add some emotions into it but great work =]

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxAngelEyes007xXx

    Wow im from a city tht has drugs the casual kidnap/murder and we always look for the missing people but stuff like tht never happens

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Haha who cares if some of it isn't "grammatically correct?" I'm sure thats EXACTLY what you were thinking about when you were writing this lol.
    I enjoyed it, mainly because of the one o' clock two o' clock thing. Real cool.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Ooh freaky. although a scary subject to write about and a cool style you wrote it in. it isnt a great poem. it didnt flow very well and there were many spelling mistakes. i think it does have potential though and you shoudl reread and correct it.

    x3Lauren