Wow. that mustve been REALLY CREEPY. i feel so bad for your neighborhood, well the innocent ones.

spelling errors:
instantly, ghetto.

good job though.

Wow that had to be scary to go through... that was a good poem, just try your flow out a little bit, you could change some of the wording, but that's all, nice job.

You did a great job telling your story!

Good job, intense story. I liked it until the very end. The ending was a bit weak and abrupt. Keep it up, I'm glad you're okay.

Ooh freaky. although a scary subject to write about and a cool style you wrote it in. it isnt a great poem. it didnt flow very well and there were many spelling mistakes. i think it does have potential though and you shoudl reread and correct it.

x3Lauren

Haha who cares if some of it isn't "grammatically correct?" I'm sure thats EXACTLY what you were thinking about when you were writing this lol.
I enjoyed it, mainly because of the one o' clock two o' clock thing. Real cool.

Wow im from a city tht has drugs the casual kidnap/murder and we always look for the missing people but stuff like tht never happens

Hey hate to be there were i live we all leave our doors unlocked and its scary to think that this does happin around the world any way you realy should add some emotions into it but great work =]

Omg! that'd be way freaky! great poem, love it!
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