Complete

by ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ   Dec 28, 2006


Part of me is gone
wandering through foreign places i will never see
dreaming of things that i can never be

it feels like i'm missing a piece
an empty void i cannot fill

i sit and wait
pray
hope
wish
this part will return

i will be complete

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  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Lovely poem mate. 5/5 deffinately. i wouldn't change a thing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    I love the fact that you did use a "normal" word pattern! I LOVED THE FORM! :)
    PV

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "it feels like i'm missing a piece
    an empty void i cannot fill"

    I can relate to this couplet and i'm sure a lot of people on this site can too.
    I love the structure of this poem
    5/5
    *Gem*

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