"it feels like i'm missing a piece
an empty void i cannot fill"

I can relate to this couplet and i'm sure a lot of people on this site can too.
I love the structure of this poem
5/5
*Gem*

I love the fact that you did use a "normal" word pattern! I LOVED THE FORM! :)
PV

Lovely poem mate. 5/5 deffinately. i wouldn't change a thing :)