Witness to all seasons

by Rachel RTVW   Dec 28, 2006


Icey waters standing still,
In the air there's quite a chill.
Snowflakes dancing down to earth,
Witness to a winter's birth.

When spring is here the flowers bloom,
Thunderous skies show their gloom.
Raindrops come to nurture life,
Witness to a Spring of strife.

Summer arrives, it's steamy hot,
The swimming pool's a favorite spot.
Outside fun, a lot to play,
Witness to a summer's day.

Autumn brings an array of color,
This is the season like no other.
Long walks, with lots to see
Witness to all seasons, you and me

Copyright©2006 Rachel Barnett

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    Lovely, Like it! ^^,

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Here we go again. Weee!
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    Witness to a winter's birth.
    [This MAY sound better as: (As) witness to a winter's birth. And so on for the rest of the ending lines. It's only a suggestion. =] ]

    Autumn brings an array of color,
    This is the season like no other.
    [This is an awkward rhyme, but only because I was looking for things to nit-pick at. I think you can pull it off. =] ]

    Wow.
    I really liked this poem. You're very talented. This said a lot; it was really simple, yet said some well thought out things. Nicely done. I love how you think deeply and put that into your poems instead of the 'oh, I hate myself, kill me, please!' crap. Lol.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Never URs

    I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    The mother of us all...we tend to forget her....silently she spins her warm embrace...beautiful write

  • 17 years ago

    by Minkus

    *thumbs up*

    This one was short and sweet. Good imagery; you managed to paint a very clear picture of each season in just a few lines. (5/5)

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