Rachel how beautiful, your description is wonderful. This is one of my favorite poems that you have written. I love to watch the seasons change. The way you write of this allows me to view this through your eyes. Thank you. Love you Aunt Cindy

Nice nature poem Rachel. I love the change of seasons too....if we could just skip Winter that is :)

Good write rachel. 5/5

You don't know me, so you won't know that I just tell people the truth (unlike so many people on this site) but I absolutly loved this poem. It was filled with intelligent and creative writing. A definate must read I'd say.

Brad

P.S. thanks for you comment on my poem 'The Mermaid'. I'm glad you liked it.

Oustanding natural imagery not to mention a great flow

Hey, just want you to know thanks for the title!!!

Again, great skill at incorporating everyday life and topics into poetry.

Snowflakes dancing down to earth,
Witness to a winters birth.

that couplet there was amazing. definitely my favorite part of the entire poem.

the rest of it was great too. 5/5

I love it.. its perfect.. i wouldnt change anything about this poem.. and is so cute.. great job 5/5!!

Very sweet, i loved it, nice job 5/5

Very pretty poem. I like how you started for winter. That was a neat idea seeing as winter does start off our year. Beautiful poem.
And THANK YOU SO MUCH! for your nice comment. It was so sweet and made me feel so good inside!
Thank you! :) *smiles*
Charisma*

Interesting poet, i like the rythm.
well done

Very interesting idea you had here. I like how you seperated each of the four seasons into four different stanzas.

Great work. 5/5.

This is nice, its sweet, i like how you did it!

Narc xxx

This poem was short and cute. I hate to repeat myself like this, but it's only true. The rhyming was amazing, the poem was amazing, I really think you should publish a book of poems. You could really get somewhere. I'm going to read alot more. Exceptional job!
5.5

I love nature poems and this one was written with such descriptive wording, i almost felt like i was there =)
Excellent work
5/5
*Gem*

*thumbs up*

This one was short and sweet. Good imagery; you managed to paint a very clear picture of each season in just a few lines. (5/5)

The mother of us all...we tend to forget her....silently she spins her warm embrace...beautiful write

I love this poem! great flow! plz comment on mine :)

Here we go again. Weee!
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Witness to a winter's birth.
[This MAY sound better as: (As) witness to a winter's birth. And so on for the rest of the ending lines. It's only a suggestion. =] ]

Autumn brings an array of color,
This is the season like no other.
[This is an awkward rhyme, but only because I was looking for things to nit-pick at. I think you can pull it off. =] ]

Wow.
I really liked this poem. You're very talented. This said a lot; it was really simple, yet said some well thought out things. Nicely done. I love how you think deeply and put that into your poems instead of the 'oh, I hate myself, kill me, please!' crap. Lol.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

Lovely, Like it! ^^,