Awww! This is so beautiful. I got hooked from the first few lines. It was so sweet and heartfelt. Excellent job! 5/5
Keep it up!

Graet poem, so pwerfull and well written!! love it! keep up the work.. 5/5

Very sweet and touching, indeed.....
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p.s.....I think you mean....poison..........

I like the poem but the only problem is you should spellcheck it before posting it. :)

I really love this poem.

"A simple embrace,
Silenced all the anger in me"

just love that idea.. it's so well written.. well done :)

keep writing!

I like it too.... keep up the good work.. bout ur title.. whooah.. its very strange but it makes ur work more unique...