Hey little short but good . :]

I gave it a 5/5
i really lovd this poem...*tear,tear*
lol jk but i really did like this poem...it was soo romantic =)

Great job. I love it.

I liked this one alot its sweet and if you havent let her know how you feel then I advise you to tell her...at least it will make you feel better even if it doesn't change her mind about you.
lyl~Danni~

Jason i love every poem of urs,and i wish that i could help u through this but all i can say is "i agree with danni" tell her

I love it its so good keep up the good work your AWESOME!!!

Nice job!!

Jason u are a good writer I like your poems because they make me under stand what your trying to say I will read more of your poems and when I get more I will tell you I am not the best writer but I know you liked my other 2 I love wrting it is so fun and all my poems are written for My x guy frined He was the friest to break my hart and it hurt. About your friend she will prob realize she made a maystake and want you back but you can't take her back it was her loss ttyl bye bye