This was very grood poem. It was sad and touching, beautifully written. Please read mine, An Immortal's love. Thanks. Keep writing. This piece was excellent!

This is realli gd. it's my fav^^ i'll put in my favorites. write more!

Beautiful poem. very sad yet enchanting. 5/5 from me, chic.

hey, im back, we just got moved in and internet service. although our computer has yet to regain the ability to recieve email. my mom is gonna try and get that fixed soon, but if you wanna talk just leave me a comment or sumthin'. i read ur other poem too. im very very sorry about ur friend. sounds like everybody's lives suck lately. my friends aint doin too well either. please give ur friend my best wishes. ill pray for her. im really truly sorry.