I think it is very good, one of your best, has perfect flow, absolutely love it, i give it a 5/5!!!, keep it up!!!

This is really beautiful. You did an excellent job!

Wow, I really liked that. Your'e really good.

o fyi last line. u had a " instead of '

and uhm im sure u wanna change ur profile...

So sorry to the above message in your poem, but as far as the poem goes, it was very well done! It was beautiful and I loved the questions at the ending of each stanza. My one suggestion is to correct and balance the flow in ths stanza.
As the sun rises deep in the sky
Know I'll always be with you
Forever by your side-
We'll make it through.
The second half of that stanza is fine, but the first half didn't sound right. Oh yeah, and when you say 'of who would I dream' isn't it 'of WHOM would I dream'? Just a typo I thought I saw.
Overall, this was a great write!
That is my second and final comment!
Congrats again!
Good job!
Charisma*

This was perfect!
There was so much depth and emotion, and it flowed flawlessly.
The imagery was just wonderful, as it always is.