Huh. This is very interesting... More like a dark view, yet not dark view on the cinema. Nicely discriptive, as well. Nicely done. |
by Mousie
You're a very talented writer... wonderful job on this really. 5/5 |
by ALEX
Also awesome.. i like how you metaphored the silence as a blanket.. or.. maybe it's a simile. i dunno. i wasn't paying attention that day in english, lol. anyways, great job. i love this one very much. |
by Michelle18
Good job on this poem...like i said, your and excellent writer. |
by Stephanie
Wow. |
Well done. |
Wow, this really good, i found a sertain level of tension, it really complimented the poem! well done! |
by Cella Bella
A nice change of topic. A little something different to read. I liked it. 5/5 |