Distant Like A Dream

by Raychil   Dec 29, 2006


I can feel it in your words
Though they're only on a screen
I can tell there's something wrong
Though it's distant, like a dream

Your father left you and your family
And you can't help the hate
Though you've tried to let it go
You can't forgive him at any rate

When he's mentioned you get depressed
But when you see him you smile
You locked away each emotion
And inside you cry all the while

Knowing all this kills me
Because there's nothing I can do
I can give you words of care
But I can't be there with you

While you're up there in your huge state
I'm in my little one here
While you're getting your heart torn
I'm stuck, waiting in fear

You tell all the things he's done
How he's put you through hell
There's more to it then that
But you will not tell

You're filled with anger
But he's your dad
You're filled with hatred
But you're still sad

You just can't ignore
How he made you live
You don't like this feeling
But you just can't forgive

And all I can do is sit right here
Reading the words on the screen
Feeling just slightly the pain you feel
But it's distant, just like a dream

*My friend is going through a really hard time, but we live in 2 different states, plus he's one of my best friends and well...it just sucks, so this is for him...:(

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  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Daniel Long

    Keep up the faithful friendship you'll never know how much that does for a person.the poem is heart moving

  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Nice poem. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by SIMPLY ME

    5/5 dude good job

  • 17 years ago

    by UnhealthyExpectations

    5/5 Very well written. I loved it all. Best wishes to you and your friend.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pieper

    Hey this is a really good poem..i have a friend like that to...i hope it all works out in the end for him