I really liked this one. I can definitley relate to this more than the other poems I've read. Wonderful write. 5/5

marcella

Aww, this was sad. im sorry you got hurt huni

much love and many kisses,
bex

Well written tho the flow is alil off i can relate tho. sounds like you got hurt bad. hope things work out

I know how much this hurts... you expressed your emotion fantasticly nice job

Can kinda relate to this poem, not completely as i know he will n has always loved me but there is times when i didnt evere think he did. but it is true. when you r given them what they want your everything to them but when your no longer together its like well we can be friends. that hurts so much when u jus want it to be how it use to be. xxtake carexx

This was a beautiful love poem. great job you did writing it. 5/ keep on writing, my dear.