Cindy, I feel what you mean in this one....as only a sister could! Good poem. 5/5

Very nice write. 5/5

*Tears*
That was amazing. Terribly sad but amazing none the less. I know what if feels like to miss someone in your life and I feel that pain in my heart every day. Wonderful job writing this one hun! Keep it up. 5/5

Stephanie

"Pain grips me with such force
Ripping at my fragile heart
I need to be resting in your arms
The pain to great when we're apart"

this is my favorite part! keep up the good work!!!

So I sit here crying, alone

While you're in a place far away

its an excellent poem with a wonderfull flow and rhym, all i would change if i were is the comma in the first verse of the last stanza, its puts the emphasis on alone. job well done!

Wow...so very sad and heartbreaking...such a pleasure to read.
You have so much talent, you really know how to hit a nerve with the reader.
Stay strong.

*also, please read my comment on the message board for you.

Wow wonderful write. I loved it. I could relate to this poem and I am sure a lot of others can as well. Great Job. The flow was good. Keep up the outstanding work.

Peace, Joe

Everybody longs for the day they finally find true love, sometimes it just takes a while, but the reward is always worth it, excellent write 5/5

This was a beautifully written poem, as are all your others. I know exactly how this feels, and it's nice to know that I'm not the only one. I hope to enjoy more of your work.

This is another great poem by you, you are really so talented

Wow.. lol finally one i havent comemtned.. and lucky me .. its a really great poem!!! like wow..! its soo sad.. but still just really great.. i cant even tell you why.. i just love it.. amazing job.. sorry i have to constructive tips its just perfect the way it is

Heartwrenching. Sadness put to rhyme.

Awww, this one is a tearful one. its good though, your writing is just amazing. xx