So many children have violent alcoholic fathers who take there anger out on them, it just isn't right. great poem 5/5

This poem is okay.. not my favorite.. liek a 4/5 but ofcourse i voted 5 anyway.. um.. it doesnt flow that well like "You tell me you love me
That you do care
But if you really did,
Then the bruise wouldn’t be there" the last line there is just super long.. and there are some other stanzas like that but for the most part its a good poem

Great Job... It really reminded me of a poem i wrote on my other account. its called 'walk a little straighter daddy.'

once again that was really well written, and had a good rythum... 5/5

Condescending;Heart.