Just a few suggestions:
1st stanza:
"rest your tied sole." - should be "rest your tired soul"

2nd stanza:
"and say your great," -should be "you're"

3rd stanza:
"as the wind still shines," that kinda doesn't make sense. it would be better if you had "as the MOON still shines"

Last stanza:
"and together were whole."-- we're
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Those are just suggestions. You can take them or leave them. Anyways. This poem was real nice. Very sweet. I liked the idea of it. Beautiful write. Don't stop writing!!

-` Liz

Good stuff i got to work but i wanna
read one more