In a pool of blood

by Michelle18   Dec 29, 2006


My heart is empty,

my soul is lost.

my spirit is gone,

and my love now cost.

my heart is numb,

i no longer feel pain.

your lies and distrust have driven me insane.

i no longer have what you called love,

you left me here to drown in a pool of blood.

feeling pain is never nice,

but i cant help but scream with every slice.

across my face and across my wrist,

the tears pour out as i make a fist.

i dont want this anymore,if this is love,

because you left me to drown in a pool of blood.

i stop with the slicing,now its a stab,

straight through the heart as i think of bad memories i've had.

i knew you wouldnt care if i died,

so in a pool of blood is where i lie.

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  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    I know you told me read any of your newer stuff but this title catched my eyes, and honestly i really liked this one alot, its really sad but in a way its like woah my boyfriend or the guy i liked didn't really care for me he just wanted to use me, or something you know. the rhyme and everything was perfect.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very deep, very dark... and Very GOOD. I loved this poem. The flow was Great, the word choice was good, and the concept was awesome! I <3 this poem. 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Suicide is always an interesting and popular subject to write about. Normally they all kind of blend in together, but I liked yours. I thought the flow was excellent, easy to read.

    your lies and distrust have driven me insane.
    ^^Loved that line.

    i dont want this anymore,if this is love,
    ^^I can relate to that line so much.

    Cayce xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    That's really amazing, the flow was excellent. The imagery was great, and I liked the style. Great job. Thanks for the comments.

  • 17 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Another very sad piece, full of emotion and memories, very powerfully written, I can relate. Written from the heart, I hope you are alright,
    Greta
    x

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