Very good poem...very sad though.. but so are mine for the most part.... 5/5

Great poem its sadddd :(( lol good job

This is scary=[..lol but it is good!

Really, Really Good.

I feel you michelle...

This is really sad. I enjoyed reading though. I think it may have read better if you put it into stanzas, but overall it's very good.

I thought this was a really good poem... maybe a little elementary in the wording, but it still deserved a 5, nice job

Wow that is really deep. The pain and sadness can be felt throught this entire piece. Excellent writing. Take care Cindy

Wow. i was immeadiately drawn in. and the DS, easier for me to read. lovely poem. keep the work up!

Wow.. very gorry but still a great write.. nice job! strong emotion

This is real good! wow, oh, and thanx for the comment on my poems!

Narc xxx

This poem isnt my favorite uve done, its a little choppy with the rhythem and rhyming. .its still got alot of emotion though

This is really sad =[
But so good. i love the flow of it..and how you can feel your pain as you read it.
5/5

Wow...
This was excellent!
I really enjoyed this.
The imagery used was astounding.
Excellently written.

Youre very talented... I love your poems...

Wow, this was a really sad poem, especially the ending. A very nice though, keep up the good work!

Great structure, short simple sentences that impact and are full of emotion, loved it! 5/5

The set out if different. very different. but i would say i good different. i found it easier to read.

5/5. the words you used are perfect for this text. this kind of writing.

David

Wow.. i really like this poem.. but this line"straight through the heart as i think of bad memories i've had." i think is a little too long for the flow of the poem

Aww, this is so sad, I'm sorry:( I liked this but once again, you should capatlize your letters. I also noticed a mistake:

"your lies and distrust has driven me insane"

It should be "have" instead of "has"

--Steph