This is really a great poem, written very nicely.

This is a miserably good poem. Nice flow, word choice, great imagery, etc etc. I can tell this poem has been written from your heart..so much emotion has been put into it.

However, personally, I think love is never a thing to self harm about. Everyone's heart gets broken, its all a part of learning the depth of what love truly is.

Keep writin' 5/5

Wow. This was great. Well not in THAT way. I loved this. You're a real good writer for poems like this. But that's a good thing. ;P This was really depressing, but really good. =]

-` Liz

I love this and i can relate to it very good... i love writing about cutting it taqkes a helluva lot of anger out... i love it.. keep up the AWESOME work and check out my poems. plz.

Omg this is a very good poem so sad.
i kow that way of thinking and i can really relate to this one its amazing!!!5/5

laura

This poem was real good, but the flow was a bit off. I really enjoyed how you mentioned the title more than once, initialing that this poem really is about the pool of blood. I also liked how you made your title a metaphor, i had though of it as a real pool of blood. You did a great job, you made images spark into mind with this one. keep it up!

Very sad poem with a lot of imagery I don’t know what help to give it is truly flawless.

That was a really dark poem! creepy and intense i could nto take my eyes off it!

Another very sad piece, full of emotion and memories, very powerfully written, I can relate. Written from the heart, I hope you are alright,
Greta
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That's really amazing, the flow was excellent. The imagery was great, and I liked the style. Great job. Thanks for the comments.

Suicide is always an interesting and popular subject to write about. Normally they all kind of blend in together, but I liked yours. I thought the flow was excellent, easy to read.

your lies and distrust have driven me insane.
^^Loved that line.

i dont want this anymore,if this is love,
^^I can relate to that line so much.

Cayce xx

Very deep, very dark... and Very GOOD. I loved this poem. The flow was Great, the word choice was good, and the concept was awesome! I <3 this poem. 5/5!

I know you told me read any of your newer stuff but this title catched my eyes, and honestly i really liked this one alot, its really sad but in a way its like woah my boyfriend or the guy i liked didn't really care for me he just wanted to use me, or something you know. the rhyme and everything was perfect.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.