That yea, could use some improvement...however. it's sweet.

My version of the poem, hope you don't mind:
For hours I wait,
To see your beautiful smile
To hold you close,
And whisper softly,
“Hello, my love.”

I wait to hear,
Three beautiful words,
From the lips,
Of a radiant angel.

I wait to feel,
The soft,
Warm touch,
Of your arms around me.

Then I gaze into,
The most breathtaking
Set of eyes,
I've ever seen,
And whisper,
One more thing.

Three words,
To show you,
How much I care.

“Darling,
I love you.”

What a wonderful poem written from a romanitc soul. Your friends reall good. *5/5*

check it out on my poemy thingi. yeaaaaa....

im bored, maybe ill go dust a few cob webs off the viola.