Wow! That was incredible!!! I mean so vivid and sorrowful. Amazing job! Prolly one of my fav's from yah :)! But you know I tend to go to the darker side,lol! Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

Wow this is reli gd i like the way u put urself in every chachter in each of ur poems it make the reader conect a wonderful rite well done.Mazie.X

How sad and depressing. Good job on this one!

He tells me it's my fault
That I was a bad little girl
These marks are to remind me
I ruined daddy's world

This part especially got to me. How many times are the poor children made to feel the blame of the breakup? Very sad and powerful. 5/5

"Mommy doesn't know
Because she's long gone
And daddy can't take that
She up and moved on"

I think it's 'upped and moved on' or something like that, but i could be wrong =)

Excellent poem Charisma! You painted such a sad picture with your words. It heart breaking to think that so many families end up like this.
Well done on this..
5/5
*Gem*