Comments : Die on me

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    I hate that feeling of wanting back what is impossible! Hope you feel better soon. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    WOW powerful stuff. im glad you
    you have us to dump this on.
    need time. lots of it . you'll never
    forget, you got yo learn to live with it
    or it will become another ghost and
    another excuse to get high. i know
    i got a millon of them. need any
    just holla. thats why i will always
    be a addict. if you get this then your
    one lucky ones.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful work dear..i like the way u repeted "No" and it added intensity to the poem.very powerfulk n well penned.....well i hp u r feeling better though..nice wrk!
    5/5!
    xxPoojaxx