It is a definate situation I've been in. Sucks, right? The stanzas were very short and almost choppy. Details would make this poem even more amazing!

-Courtney-

Awww. That's such a beautiful poem!
Keep up the great work.
You've got some awesome poems!
God Bless 5/5

~Tay~

Very good job on this one.
The heart break can be felt throughout. The pain of loosing we love sometimes to much to bare.
My favorite part I relate to was.
In the heat of the night
I think of you
Push my tears a side
And try to move on.
That is when pain hits the most. Excellent job!

5/5. An Amazing write. I see so many other people trying to put their emotions down but just end up being forced but yours is like your heart is spilled onto the paper! An amazing write and you are a true poet. ** This poem spoke to me. After heartbreaks this is what i feel. Just amazing.

Jobo! That was very good. It has so much emotion in it. and flows really well. I know what you're going through.. & I hope you'll be okay! It was very beautifully written! I loved it. Keep it up & Take care.

Bri.x

There is not one poem of yours that i do not like. you are just an amazing poet and you need to keep up the amazing work. 5/5

This was so sad...yet so beautifully written.
I liked this because there were heaps of emotion in it.

Awww nice poem... i'm going through the exact same thing with a boy.. i really understand how it feels. good job!

Awwwwwww
beautifully written, touching and true poem!
♥
5/5
~Stephen White

Omg that was one of the best poems ive ever read
i can really relate
:'(
-liz-

Awwwwwwww
wonderfull poem !!!
i really liked it
anywayz could you ciomment my new poem called why shall i??
thanx~~~~~~~~~~~~

This was a sad one. I know too well what it's like to love but not be loved in return. Hope everything works out ((assuming that this is/was true))

Ciao~

I fell the same way rate now me and my bf just broke up but were still friends he said he wonted to get 2 know me better but ya
grate job short and 2 the point

plz coment on my pomes! ttyl