Loving You

by BrokenREALiTy   Dec 29, 2006


Loving you is a disease,
It's something I cannot rid of.
Bringing in pain and agony;
Yet it's something I come to love.

Loving you is a necessity,
It's like the air that I breathe.
Falling into your eyes,
My whole world comes to a freeze.

Loving you is a drug,
It's already got me addicted.
When I'm with you, I can't deny,
The feelings that I'm convicted.

Loving you is a remedy,
It helps my broken heart heal.
Curing my sadness when I'm down;
I can't deny the way I feel.

Loving you is everything,
With my heart beating so fast.
Please stay with me, amour,
So that our love will forever last.
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I love the flow & the rhythm in this poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Very sweet and beautiful poem about love. it had a lot of meaning to it. i defiantly enjoyed reading it. you are very talented! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was really sweet...
    I loved the wording that you used, and I was hooked from the beginning.
    I think this was beautifully written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aww, this was so beautiful and sweet. Every line was perfect, and I can certainly relate, being in love can be the best and the worse feeling in the world, and you captured that beautifully. Your rhymes didn't seem forced and I loved this!

    --steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is so sweet! this is exactly how i feel right now. i love the way you show emotion into your poems.this is a great poem.keep up the good work.

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