I love the metaphors you have used in this poem and can easily relateThe poem has a nice rhythm and it is very touching

This was real sweet. There isn't really anything I would suggest changing. Flowed very well...enjoyable read. Honestly, I don't really know what to day. Heh. Beautiful write...I loved it!! 5/5 Take care.

-` Poetess

Aww thats nice i like this it is nice. 5/5

Great, one of the best love poems on this site. You really made the repetition benefit the whole poem. Your flow and use of words was good. My favorite stanza was the last, it was just like a perfect moment.

Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper.

This is so sweet! this is exactly how i feel right now. i love the way you show emotion into your poems.this is a great poem.keep up the good work.

Aww, this was so beautiful and sweet. Every line was perfect, and I can certainly relate, being in love can be the best and the worse feeling in the world, and you captured that beautifully. Your rhymes didn't seem forced and I loved this!

--steph

This was really sweet...
I loved the wording that you used, and I was hooked from the beginning.
I think this was beautifully written.

Very sweet and beautiful poem about love. it had a lot of meaning to it. i defiantly enjoyed reading it. you are very talented! 5/5

~Kristina

I love the flow & the rhythm in this poem