.if we could be.

by kelly   Dec 29, 2006


*This poems means a lot to me. I made it and it took a really long time. If you actually pick it apart you'll find some deeper meanings. I got the idea from "We Real Cool" by Gwendlyn Brooks.*

I love you.
It's so true.

You hate me.
I can see.

I don't care.
It's not fair.

You'll love me.
It's to be.

I'll wed you.
and birth two.

We'll die here.
Die with fear.

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    This is an interestng poem. Very short, but well-rhymed. But I don't understand how he can hate you yet marry you? Not criticizing, but I am confused....
    Charisma*