Shattered Memories

by *Charisma*   Dec 29, 2006


Leaving my heart torn and tattered
Bruises covering this soul; shattered
Reasons given are mixed and confused
Feel so lonely, lost, and abused
False hope spoken had shed dim light
Now forgotten, covered by night
Fear was hidden in good dreams
Love was never what it seemed
I thought pretend was real and true
My mind blinded lies you threw
Photos ripped upon the floor
Just like promises held before
Before the lies, deceit, and pain
Wait! This was all part of the game.
The smiles and times we shared
Were never real, you never cared
So I can't even have memories of you
Now how can I pull myself through?
Why'd you do this, leave me here
Soon I'll drown among my tears
I can't pickup nor can I move on
Nothing's left to make me strong
Stuck in the past that shouldn't be
Where you took the life from me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Nice flow and good rhyme.. your emotions come out nicely in this poem... im sure a lot of people can relate to it

  • 17 years ago

    by CondescendingHeart

    Awe; That was really good. normally i dont really like poems that are written in one paragraph. But i really liked this one. Great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    This was a well written poem. almost made me cry a bit... The rythem was well put. there was such a deep feeling behind the poem.. great work :)

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "The smiles and times we shared
    Were never real, you never cared"

    Lovely wording in this couplet! I loved the poem. I like the way it is all crammed into one stanza....it's a change of pace for me to read. Lovely job!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I can so relate to this poem. Loved these lines:

    Fear was hidden in good dreams
    Love was never what it seemed
    I thought pretend was real and true
    My mind blinded lies you threw

    Great flow and rhyme throughout. Great job as always! 5/5

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