The emotion was very good in this.. you have this thing where you keep to three lines each stanza.. why? It doesn't always flow correctly. Anyway.. good work. 4.3/5

Damn...it's the same with everyone of them.They are so much better than mine.Well keep it up because you're great at it and very talented at it.

~Kelsey Marie~

And the award 4 the best poem ive read so far goes to COLBY. good job, keep it up=)