by Cindy Dec 30, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The first time we talked I knew, |
by Baby Rainbow
Such a happy poem but such a sad ending, just like the story of life i guess?? |
I commented this on also so imm gonna choose another one |
Wow. I can deffinitley relate to this! I loved the last stanza.. I loved it all, actually. Lol. It has so much emotion in it, and amazingly beautiful images were painted in my head. Absolutley wonderful! Keep it up. |
Wow.. this is my favorite poem by you.. the ending was totally unexpected.. i payed more attention to the title i may have expected it but i didn't and it was great.. it gave me goosepubmps lol idk why.. i just thought it was going to be so happy but it wasnt it was just ahh idk lol i love this poem! hehe sorry i totally just blabbered on in this comment.. bc i just love this poem and i really dont know why =P |
by emad
Very nice u can spend time lookin for words but find them gathered like this as a necklace cinday plz read my poem named places u just wrote what i was trying to say |