How sad. Dreams and poetry can take you to a wonderful place though can't they? Nicely done!

Another bittersweet beautiful poem, Cindy

Bittersweet yet so full of the love that stays no matter what...
You've found your calling in love poetry Cindy! lol
I love them =)
5/5
*Gem*

Cindy this is a beautiful love poem, but still sad.
I especially like the last stanza:

All good things must come to a end,
Waking I remember your not here.
I was not embraced in your arms,
On my lips just the taste of a tear.
Good job again!
5/5

Such a beautiful poem *sniffles* made me sad a little though 5/5

Wow.
That was beautifully written but terribly sad. I could feel how much you love this person and how much you miss them. =[ You did a wonderful job on this one overall, especially the way you portrayed your emotions. Great job. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Awww so sweet and the end is so sad! great job!

Awww.... well written... i love it. and i love how it flows... i have a similar poem called dream love and this reminded me of that.... great job. 5/5 sweetie

This is a very good poem cindy, besides a few grammer mistakes its perfect, i give it a 5/5!!!

The hardest thing is to have your bliss ripped out from under you with out warning. then to realize all that you lost. I feel for you. 5/5 nice write. i wish you hope and happiness.

Waking I remember you're not here.

its a good poem! not your best though, but i still liked it!

Wow, the emotion within this poem was great. I loved it. The flow as well as the structure were both great. Excellent Job! Keep up the amazing work.

Peace, Joe

This is a beautiful poem! I really loved the use of words and the emotional detail you used! Keep up the great work! God Bless 5/5

~Tay~

This was beautifully written. I loved the emotion conveyed, and you really brought forth the image of suddenly having somebody with you, and then all of a sudden they are gone.

"All good things must come to a end,
Waking I remember your not here.
I was not embraced in your arms,
On my lips just the taste of a tear."

The first two lines of this stanza should read -
"All good things must come to AN end,
Walking, I remember YOU'RE not here."

Anyway, excellent work.

This was so sad...yet so beautifully written.
I loved the imagery used in this, and the rhyme scheme really captured me.

Very nice u can spend time lookin for words but find them gathered like this as a necklace cinday plz read my poem named places u just wrote what i was trying to say
excelent work

Wow.. this is my favorite poem by you.. the ending was totally unexpected.. i payed more attention to the title i may have expected it but i didn't and it was great.. it gave me goosepubmps lol idk why.. i just thought it was going to be so happy but it wasnt it was just ahh idk lol i love this poem! hehe sorry i totally just blabbered on in this comment.. bc i just love this poem and i really dont know why =P

Wow. I can deffinitley relate to this! I loved the last stanza.. I loved it all, actually. Lol. It has so much emotion in it, and amazingly beautiful images were painted in my head. Absolutley wonderful! Keep it up.

Bri.x

I commented this on also so imm gonna choose another one

Such a happy poem but such a sad ending, just like the story of life i guess??

you write this one well. good work xx