Let

by Wings Of Flames   Dec 30, 2006


Let the enchanting oceans crawl,
Let the birds come from the trees,
Let nothing stop the rain,
Let peace end lonely pleas,

Let depression become scarce,
Let suicide become unheard,
Let tears become a smile,
Let good thought become a word,

Let nothing stop the joy,
Let evolution cease the pain,
Let anew become unforgotten,
Let no crack in window pane,

Let the sky be the limit,
Let survival be the prize,
Let media lose control,
Let the heat end the rise

Let this dream be of truth,
Let us smile, breathe and kiss,
Let resolution be a saviour,
Let nothing end this bliss,

Let next year be the one,
Let it change greater good,
Let our happiness run wild,
Let it be as it should.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Usually if a poem starts with the same word every line, it's ennoying, but this was such a good poem! =] I enjoyed it =) And made me think about the things.. what if everything was like that.. What is every tear would become a smile =)? hehe keep it up.
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I reallyl ike this because personally i feel it sounds like a prayer, it seems really well though of and well expressed :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What an inspiring message. Good flow and the rhyming doesn't seem forced. Great job on this!

  • 17 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    You are a splendid writer! yes, i said splendid ;]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautiful.
    Such an inspiring write..
    The imagery was fantastic, as always, and the flow was perfect.

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