My 1st love

by Kiki   Dec 30, 2006


I loved you silently
to scared to say it freely
you only knew what you can see
but oh how i wonder did you love me
your jokes were good
i laughed every time i could
you made me lose my breath
almost bringing me to my death
you made butterflies fly within me
you just couldn't see
with you i felt free
free to be me!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kelso

    This poem is good i can relate to it in a way i really like this guy but im not sure if he likes me good job 5/5.
    **Kelsey**

  • 17 years ago

    by desiree

    I can really relate to this poem .. i just wish there was more too it .. ( more feeling ) .

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