by *Ill Never Let Go* Dec 30, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
On my final day i spend it with you,Walk below the stars feel the sand between our toes and hear the crashing waves that were ever so close |
by hippiehxc
The caps part at the end isn't really needed. Neither are the exclaimation marks. But other then those things this is very well written. |
by Tom Swart
Ditto on what I said about another poem of yours...Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. |