It's amazing what a new life can bring us, it opens our eyes to so much more and the world seems a far better place, excellent write 5/5

I love this poem... thanks for the comments, idc if i closed it, i wont be mean and not do them, i appreciate you taking the time to read it and i'm so glad you liked it... this poem reminds me of my best friend and my cousin, who are both basically my sisters... beautiful job 5/5

Wonderful, and such a pretty poem. You did a great job with it and I love the topic. :]

Awww.. this is SOO ADORABLE!!!.. wonderful.. and spectacular write.. nice word choice... keep up the good work

An absolute gorgeous piece
5/5 xo