Excellent job on this write. Your word choice is great. Loved reading this.

Very intense thoughts..I loved it

Wow, impressing poem, it has really deep meaning and you wrote it excellently. I love the topic, it is so original and you created superb atmosphere, very emotional. Well done! Idea for whole piece is truly creative...

Wow very expressive poem
i loved every word
keep it up Corrine!
p.s i love the way your name sounds:)