Comments : Masked

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I've seen a lot of poem on this subject, i've did one myself a while back and rarely do i see them as done as well as this..
    Excellent work!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by xSpiritedShadowx

    Absolutely stunning. Great job. *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    So well written, I love it, and it's true. So very true.... Thanx for the comments on my poems! Keep up the good work!5/5!!
    Much Love,
    ~*Danielle*~

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "Staring into the mirror
    She sees someone new
    Her face masked so much
    She no longer looks true"

    Lovely stanza! I agree with Gem, I've seen this type of poem many ways and I have also written one of my own, but this is done excellent!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by - xoxrachellee.;

    That's really good. I liked the way you used certain words in this poem, and you definitely showed us a point in this.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I enjoyed this poem. One of the better poems on makeup covering the true you. Though I don't think makeups bad I don't think it should mask your personality. You shouldn't become a different person just because you are wearing it.
    Thanks for the comment on my non-rhyming poem. I don't normally write them, and I don't love to read them. Almost EVERYTHING else I write is rhyming. You should check out my other stuff. Thanks though!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent poem && so true.
    Thanks for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by Koriey Korrupted

    Wow. This is amazing.
    My favorite Stanza is
    "Staring into the mirror
    She sees someone new
    Her face masked so much
    She no longer looks true"

    5/5

    Koriey

  • 17 years ago

    by somehow broken

    This is so good. you are so talented and i hope u always keep on writing. it is so true i see so many girls who are like that. its kind of sad too. well done =)

    emily

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Your poem is so good and it a shame but
    thats how we pick each other. think would
    even give a unattractive guy the time of the day? no you pick the cute guys like guys
    pick the babes.we all never get to know
    that beatiuful person inside