by Tom Swart
Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. Bravo!! |
Omg this poem is sooooo sweet and i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow its just so awesome!!!! keep up the great work hun!! |
by Mousie
Aww omg too cute... i really loved it, it was written so nicely, i could completely picture it all. very nicely written, as always! 5/5 |
by Michelle18
Awwwwwwwww how sweet!!!! really good poem. i enjoyed it. great job! 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
Awwwh, I loved this one. |
Awww how sweet i like this 5/5 |
Overall.. the poem was well.. good. Unfair... because I was supposed to be harsh. Anyway.. |
by Cindy
What a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind. So lovely! The flow the discreption are all so wonderful! This has to be one of the best love poems I have read. Take care Cindy |
Wow, Just wow, I am stunned. I loved it. Very nicely written. Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job. Keep up the outstanding work. |
The outstanding imagery in this romantic love poem is enhanced by your poetic choice of heavenly metaphors blended with the rhythm flowing from your heart. In other words I love it |
by Reggie Jay
This Poem is really really good man. This is a serious talent here. good job |
by Goran Rahim
This is really a perfect poem which is written perfectly. you are an awsome poet, keep it up |
by Tripp
An absolutely amazing poem...poems written about love always come off the most strongly to me...there's so much emotion in this. I love it. I know exactly how you feel. I've been graced by this amazing girl entering my life. |
by Rona
Beautiful!!! That took my breath away for a second! No lies! That's a sweet poem you have there! Terrific job! Well, I have no suggestions on how to improve it, cos it's fine the way it is =P |
by Ashley
This is so sweet and adorable..... you really do have mad skills with a pencil!!!! |
by Rachel RTVW
This is beautiful. I like the repetition of hand in hand. I have one suggestion, that you remove ever from the last line of the first stanza for the purpose of flow. Great poem! |
I love this poem.. its flows really nicely and its written so well.. it paints a picture .. its so great the only thing that is alittle off is in third line in the last stanza its a little too long |
by Taylor
Karl, (may I call you carl, or 'Mr. Wild' lol) I want to thank you so much for writing this poem. You have no possible idea how much it really touched me. Really.. this is your best in my opinion. You describe the experience quite exquisitely. Thank you. |
by Bethany
Dude, you have an awesome tallant! |
by lexie
This was so beautifully written,its amazing the effect love has on people.this girl must be really lucky to have a guy like you.great job 5/5 |