I dont think u need more praise from me, but u know what i mean, its really good, i miss u so much..

Aww it's so cute. It gave me the metaphor of being safe in someone's hands, and no one could touch you when they were with each other. ^_^ Cute feeling lol.

The flow was really good for the most part. Just the first stanza really got me thrown off with the flow.
[Why the stars seem brighter then ever before]
Suggestion: Why the stars seem brighter than before --> It helps the flow a lot and still keeps the idea of the original write.

The rhymes and vocabulary you used were great! They really gave me a good image in my head of what was happening and how you felt about it. Great job. =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

Wow, this was awesome and reminding me of so many pleasent nights i spent with my ex. he was just amazing, so sweet and gentle and kind, i spent every moment of every day with him, he is just adorable, I miss him.
Anyways, a lovely poem, with so much love and emotion, keep writing
xxxxx

Aww! Such a sweet sweet poem. It was really beautiful. The rhyming was amazing - my favourite part of the poem. It had a good flow, and the vocab usage was really good. The emotian is portrayed brilliantly. An excellent job! Keep it up! xx

Such a sweet poem, i could actually see a picture of two people walking hand in hand and it made me smile, great flow throughout!
5/5

Wow, I love the descriptions! It paints a beautiful picture in my mind!
5/5
xoxo

Hey bro this poems is awesome. it totally painted a pic for me, is this a peson in your life?but keep up the great work bro, ill be sure to read you a lot more.

Very nice

I enjoyed reading this poem a lot...to me it sounded sweet...a beautifully written poem indeed... I like the description and the imagery...keep up the good work...and hope to read more...5/5 :)

Thats amazing and beautiful, really good work, keep it up!

Unbelievably this comes from the same mind that produces The One Eyed Beast.

Nicely done man, this definitely gives you some points for that erotic poem you wrote! ahaha, you are a talented poet my friend.

Incredible. good work with imagery, painted a great picture with only a few words

It's so beautiful!

Aww. this poem was so sweet. I loved the descriptions. It was a very well written poem. You are one of the few writers that rhymes the way you do in such an eloquent way. wonderful write! 5/5

You write the most beautiful love poems I've read on this site. I really mean that. This seems so heartfelt. 5/5

marcella

God[']s command.

again this is fabulous. i love your work. you have been favorited.

Nice structure and word choice. I enjoyed your poem. Keep it up.

Awwww... you just have a way with words and describing love. This poem actually made me smile. It's just a great feeling altogether and the way you described it made it even better. Of course you deserve nothing less than a 5.

Hehe definatly worth reading again =D
i luv the descriptive writing and great word use, i enjoyed every line!