Really a wonderful poem... i enjoyed it, you're a good writer... thanks for the comments, i figured i'd still do yours b/c you took the time to look at mine and i appreciate that... thanks for the comment, i'm trying to get more people to look at it, i love that song. great job on your poem 5/5

Wonderfully written . The flow was nice and I loved the rhyming . I normally don`t read life&society poems, but i like this[:
Thank yu for yur comment on mine . I really appreciate it ^-^
Again, great job .
..__MiNDYY

5/5. Kind of hard to understand what your trying to write here. But still a good poem.

That is some real skill there. it flowed beautifully and the rhyming- nice nice.
It was deep, and just really good. i loved the poem.

Wow, wonderful write. I liked it. The flow was good as well as the structure. Keep up the excellent work. You are a truly good poet.

Peace, Joe

Whoa... this poem is so cool! I felt as if I were the rider.. weird.. you poems really suck me in. Again, I loved that last stanza the best. Amazing rhyming.. you make it look so easy. Great beat.. kept me moving throughout it, You did a great job!

Excellent

5/5

I really liked your descriptions and your vocabulary used in this poem. It was deep and meaningful, but still able for the reader's to understand what you're trying to express.

I also liked your topic used. It's not cliche at all, and I found it rather interesting. It got me thinking, and when I'm reading poems, I don't usually think much about them afterwards, but just read it over again and look for the literary stuff. This left me wanting to read more. Great write. =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

Great poem

Awesome poem!!!! Love it!

I loved how much into detail you went, description-wise, and your vocabulary. It was very interesting and kept me reading. Very nice job.

5.5

I could feel the reins in my hands and every word you said paints a picture. It makes sense.

I loved this poem, it was amazing. 5/5

~Lizzie~