Lovely! Kind of sad too! I know where you're coming from! Great job!
xoxo

The seniments you have penned are beautiful. very well done.

LOL besides a few typos this was well done. I thought it was sad but so true in real life. Good job!
Charisma*

This was also very well written. very touching piece. xx

This is very good. Well written with good flow and rhyme. 5/5

Wow again a perfect piece of work, Gemma you're forever my idol with your amazing words, i hope one day i can write like you do :) all your poems are simply amazing :)

Been there, but had 2 break up with tha dude

Amazing poem it is really cute and a litte teary keep yupp the great word

peace
-Ameeee

You know, before 7th period today, I could relate to this so much.
But, after that, my boyfriend broke up with me and I realized I shouldn't have been keeping it inside.
Great job darling :)