You Never Seem To Believe It

by Gem   Dec 30, 2006


Whenever I try to show you
The love we have is real
You never seem to believe it
Even thought it's how I feel

Even when I tell you
You're the only one for me
You never seem to believe it
Don't know how to make you see

No matter how many times
I tell you this is love
You never seem to believe it
Words just aren't enough

Whenever I try my best
To make sure my love shows
You never seem to believe it
That you're the one I chose

Even when I cry to you
And say you own my heart
You never seem to believe it
This is breaking me apart

No matter what I say
To tell you this loves true
You never seem to believe it
When I say "I love you"... ©

*Gem*

(A fictional poem, just trying to rid myself of bad feelings =(

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow that is really good. i am glad it is fiction but letting your feelings out is good.
    5/5

    xx.chelsea.xx

    ps. haha ya that poems was really random. I got in trouble so i don't think i am supposed to be on the computer this weekend but i check my e-mails a lot more then i check this. so e-mail me:) haha talk to you later. and thanks for the comment on my cheese poem. (L)

  • 17 years ago

    by Diana J. Armenta

    I love this poem...cuz in a way its true...why do the people you love dont believe what u really feel sometimes?

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Yeah ive been trying for 5 months now to rid myself of bad feelings, but im still smiling and your poems help more then you shall ever know, i want you to know you're a treasured part of my wrecked world :)

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I like the repetion of the line :

    You never seem to believe it

    ....gives a nice continuity to the whole piece. Nice job once again. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    What a sad poem....
    some how I can relate to it

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