Great job babes! Check out my new poem "Thanks For being There" I think you'll like it! Great poem sweetie!
xoxo

Another well written piece by you. Your talent really shines.

Good job!
The repetitve use of the line is different for you, but fit with the poem itself. Not a fav, but not bad either!
Charisma*

Hey hun very well written this one. good job xx

What a sad poem....
some how I can relate to it

I like the repetion of the line :

You never seem to believe it

....gives a nice continuity to the whole piece. Nice job once again. 5/5

Yeah ive been trying for 5 months now to rid myself of bad feelings, but im still smiling and your poems help more then you shall ever know, i want you to know you're a treasured part of my wrecked world :)

I love this poem...cuz in a way its true...why do the people you love dont believe what u really feel sometimes?

Wow that is really good. i am glad it is fiction but letting your feelings out is good.
5/5

xx.chelsea.xx

ps. haha ya that poems was really random. I got in trouble so i don't think i am supposed to be on the computer this weekend but i check my e-mails a lot more then i check this. so e-mail me:) haha talk to you later. and thanks for the comment on my cheese poem. (L)