by LadyPearl Dec 30, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Scarlet rose lies in my cheeks |
This is very beautiful:) |
by SMILEoften
Once again, an amazing read. This one flowed beautifully, as well. I also love your word selection, as in phrases like "bedazzled eyes". This sort of expression isn't used a lot -- it's a rare thing to say and I like it! It really grabbed my attention. 5/5 from Shanna. |
by shamvi
Wow..its nice.. |
Very Beautiful Poem, Really I enjoyed.... |
This is such a beautiful poem! Great work! You use of vocabulary was strong and really made the poem more emotional I guess you can say. |