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Me and my stepdad went shoppin for a dog. we couldn't find the right one. finally we found the cutest thing. a three month old miniature pincher. we took him home to my mo as a early christmas present she loved him. Now hes a part of our life. his name is biggie.

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(it should be like this...)
Me and my step-dad
went shoppin for a dog.
we couldn't find the right one.
finally we found the cutest thing.
a three month old miniature pincher.
we took him home to my mo*mother* as a early christmas present she loved him.
Now hes a part of our life.
his name is biggie.

*my sure make it a pharagraph not a sentense. it's not look like a poem... it's like a short comversation, eh!!! anyway ill give 3/5 fair...*