Very nice. I liked this piece a lot. *5/5

Hey elnaz...

plz feel better.. id love to see that girl come out ne day!! u r one of the most patient, supportive ppl ive ever met! a lot of people might have judged me by now, but you NEVER did. thank u 4 being there 4 me :)

and about my poem 4 u: 5 and 6 symbolize the bird you wrote about. i love birds too; especially their freedom and joy :) some of the things i always get jealous they have so easily.

~LOL (lots of love)
Rain

I liked the piece, im sry that this happend to you for a change hopefully it was for a good thing or changed you in a good way.
cobrey,
p.s. the poem wasnt about marina.

O_O I can't find ur latest poems, either! I think there's a glitch!

.... u can't ever lose hope in that girl you know, because she still is deep inside.

VERY nicely done!!!! i love it!!!
my favorite part is..>>
must say goodbye to this lively girl,
and hide the tears she cries,
she doesn't belong,
here in my life,
to me i say goodbye.
....
its just wonderful..
ooh and that poem is not about cobrey... that is a true story about me and a man named Bryan....
-Marina.

Wow i really like this poem. it is AWESOME. 5/5. :D

Very powerful. I love the way you start it off with something simple, and then move into the deeper stuff. Each stanza spoke volumes. I particularly liked these two:
"There used to be a girl i knew,
whose laughter filled the air,
whose adventurous streak,
and sparkling eyes,
used to set the room aflame."
I thought that this one just painted a beautiful picture, and I loved it. Also, this one:
"used to her sitting in class,
trying to work out a sum,
and see her laugh,
and jump up and down,
when she finally worked out what it was."
This one reminded me of me. I've done this before, numerous times. Especially since math is not my strong suit. Wonderful job. It was beautiful. 5/5

Great poem loved it i can relate!